Chapter One: Officially Edited

Chapter one is now edited and finished! Well, finished for awhile, at least. I'm happy with it, so I hope you guys are, too!



Comments on Chapter One or New Found Love in genral:

"Amazing!!! I absolutely love the narration (I know I've said it a thousand times). It's so realistic and fun to read." - Evie J

"I was soo captivated I realised I wasn't making any comment notes!" - Author S M Johnston

"I actually reread it all because it became a different story. It was a great change." - Temperance

"I'm picking this and I'll be back for more." - gillofnerd


Don't Believe Them? Go Check It Out For Yourself!

http://inkpop.com/projects/7630/new-found-love/

Finally!

I'm working on a new chapter, even though I'm not down editing yet. I've been inspired to write more, so.... New chapter on the way soon!

Comments

I'm getting some great comments from inkpop! Lots of helpful tips that I'll be using next time I edit the chapters!

Thanks SO much everyone!